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Troubled  Girl  on  a  Dark  Country  Road
Troubled Girl on a Dark and Lonely Country Road     Motel at Night with Vacancy Sign

It was dark and and cold along a stretch of country road where I saw the young woman walking. I was driving my granddaughter and a friend to a teenager movie in Bonsall, about 17 miles from where we lived in Fallbrook, a small town in Northern San Diego County. The woman was walking in the opposite direction, toward town.

The girls were busy chatting and didn't notice her — but I wanted to pull the car over so I could go back and ask if something was wrong and if we could help. However, the narrow two-lane road between the rural towns was busy that night and there was no convenient place to pull over for making a U-turn. So I kept driving.

Nonetheless, the vision haunted me all the way to the theater — and I knew I would try to stop and see if she needed help on the return drive. I half-way expected to see a disabled car left alongside the road, but none was to be seen. If she were actually going to Fallbrook, she would have to travel at least another dozen miles to the outskirts, where there was an all-night gas station. Why would a young woman, not too warmly dressed, be making this trip by foot on a cold, moonless night?

I dropped the girls at the movie and anxiously returned to the road to begin looking for her. A few minutes later she came into view, still walking toward town.

I slowed down, passed her by a few yards, and pulled to the side of the road. I got out and began walking toward her. Not surprisingly, she had stopped and began looking around in a helpless way. She didn't run, probably because there was no place to run to. In any case, the headlights of passing cars made it possible for her to see me pretty clearly as I approached. Well, I'm a harmless guy who actually does look like a harmless guy. So she started walking somewhat nervously toward me.

I called out that I'd spotted her while going taking some kids to Bonsall, and that I wondered if she needed help.

Well, she didn't need much encouragement to get in the car — she was shivering from the cold and said the car's heater felt good.

I explained that I had dropped kids off at the movies and would be going back for them in a couple of hours. Then I asked if she wanted to tell me what had happened to her.

Her face turned pale as she looked straight ahead and said, "My boyfriend — he made me get out of the car back there."

"Really?" I exclaimed in genuine amazement. "Why would he do a thing like that?"

"An argument. He was really, really mad at me. I, I'd rather not talk about it."

"Do you live around here?" I asked.

"No — Los Angeles. We were going to see some friends in San Diego, but stopped in Murrieta to see some other friends first."

"So what are you going to do now?"

"If I can get to a phone, I'll try calling the friends in Murrieta. Maybe they'll come and get me."

"There's a gas station and a strip mall up the road a ways," I said, "along with some phone booths. Do you have money for the call?"

"I guess so — got some loose change in my purse." Gas Station at Nigh

As the gas station loomed into sight through the fog that had begun to gather, I said I could give her money for the call if she needed it. (This was in the early 80s — before cell phones.)

She smiled and said, "Thank you, but I think I have enough. I may even be able to reverse the charges."

"They must be good friends," I said.

"Well, when they hear what he did to me..."

The gas station phones were in use, but there was a phone booth across the street next to a Safeway Market, which stayed open till 10 PM.

"I'll wait while you make the call — I don't want to leave you stranded here."

She smiled and thanked me again as she reached for coins in her purse. She was about five minutes into the call when she put the phone down and came back to the car. "Can you tell me where we are? They need to know so they can come and get me."

I told her and then followed her back to the phone booth, to make sure she gave them accurate directions.

She thanked me again and said her friends could be there in about an hour.

"Let's wait in the car," I suggested. "It's cold out here."

She agreed with a smile and quickly got back into the passenger seat.

Then she did something that took me totally by surprise — she leaned over and gave me a big warm kiss, full on the lips.

"Uh — thank you," I stuttered, "but you didn't have to do that."

"I know," she smiled, "but you have been so nice to me — and I appreciate it."

Then she took one of my hands in hers, gave it a squeeze, and said, "Now I want to do something nice for you. What can I do?"

I was in a mild state of shock, and tried to think of an appropriate answer. In the meantime, she had glanced briefly over my shoulder — and I turned to see what had caught her attention. It was the local Best Western Motel with a VACANCY sign shining brightly through the fog. Neon Vacancy Sign

She sighed and leaned in close. "So...?"

Well, I'd be lying if I said the thought of having sex with an attractive twenty-something in a cozy motel room didn't have a certain appeal. I even rationalized that it would be more comfortable than waiting in the car, and that, instead of sex, we could just talk while we waited for her friends.

And maybe someday I'll write a fictional ending to this story that will be more exciting than the way it actually did end. I told Melody I'd be glad to wait till her friends came, but that she didn't owe me anything.

She smiled again and gave my hand another squeeze. "Okay," she said, "but you don't need to stay. I can wait inside the market and will be able to see my friends when they arrive. Besides, your wife is probably wondering why you aren't back yet."

Well, as for explaining the absence to my wife, that would have been no problem. In those days I was on the road a lot between my office in Anaheim and my home in Fallbrook, which were 75 miles apart. Consequently, pulling over for a nap was something I had done many times. Also, taking a car nap while kids were at the movies would be nothing new.

However, I just smiled as Melody opened the door and told her to take care of herself. Before getting out, though, she leaned over and gave me another kiss — this time on the cheek.

"I wish I had a boyfriend like you," she said.


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